Great job on your elevator pitch. You were able to clearly present the current issue with online shopping as well as your solution to the problem. I think your idea would help millions of consumers, especially since online commerce growth has been on the rise. I was surprised to hear that nearly half of online shoppers are unsatisfied with their online shopping experience due to not being able to try products beforehand. This leaves you with a huge target audience that would benefit from your idea.
Amazing job on your pitch! You went at a good pace. On some of the in-class examples we looked at so many people spoke way too fast that I couldn’t catch everything they were saying. When I was practicing, I noticed that when I was standing I would talk really fast so I had to work really hard at trying to slow myself down. I really like the hook you chose to start with because I feel like anyone who does online shopping can relate.
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ReplyDeleteGreat job on your elevator pitch. You were able to clearly present the current issue with online shopping as well as your solution to the problem. I think your idea would help millions of consumers, especially since online commerce growth has been on the rise. I was surprised to hear that nearly half of online shoppers are unsatisfied with their online shopping experience due to not being able to try products beforehand. This leaves you with a huge target audience that would benefit from your idea.
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Amazing job on your pitch! You went at a good pace. On some of the in-class examples we looked at so many people spoke way too fast that I couldn’t catch everything they were saying. When I was practicing, I noticed that when I was standing I would talk really fast so I had to work really hard at trying to slow myself down. I really like the hook you chose to start with because I feel like anyone who does online shopping can relate.
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